Great magazine title! This pitch gives me a clear idea of what your magazine is all going to be about and what is going to be in side it.
I liked your pitch. I think it looked really fashionable & I think that will be what makes your magazine stand out
This pitch explains well the ideas that you have for your magazine, more pictures could have been added.
WHAT A PITCH. At first I questioned the format, as it varies from the typical spoken pitch, but due to the self explanatory and good choice of words, as well as the choice of images and music I was completely engaged. I came away feeling informed and having a good idea to what your magazine may look like.Great pitch Jack!
Good pitch, it shows your ideas really well. Your style is very prominent and gives a good representation of your genre. Your magazine looks like it will be effective in its final design. Maybe just think about possible colour schemes.
You get across your ideas for your magazine very well. More pictures could have been added.
Your ideas come across really well and it shows us what your genre is. Very good pitch.
really good pitch shows a clear vision for your future magazine
good pitch, clear to see what your magazine will be
Great pitch, your magazine is well thought through.
The images represent your genre well and outline what your magazine will look like. Its a really good pitch and the theme and styles will fit your audience well.
Good pitch, the pictures represent your idea well.
Clear pitch, the pictures you have used how your idea well.
Good ideas, I like the minimalistic style you have chosen, be careful not to under design your magazine though, keep in mind to include all important aspects. Also I like the use of the black and white colour scheme it is very fitting for your genre.